Monday, November 14, 2011

Smells and Similes


Maybe it's the smell of wet leaves in the air, but I always think November has great smells.

Smells, scents, odors, aromas--whatever you want to call them--are one of the hardest things to describe when we write. Sometimes it's easier if we use a simile: a comparison using the words "like" or "as."

Try to describe what the following things smell like using a simile. Go wild with your imaginations!

I'll get us started.

  • Dirty socks: Her dirty socks smelled like five-day-old fish.
  • Salsa: Mom's homemade salsa smelled like the best vegetable garden on Earth.
Now you try some:

  • Burning rubber
  • Clean sheets
  • Peanut butter
  • The inside of our car
  • The inside of my desk
  • An eraser
  • My dog's ears
  • A tree trunk
  • A rusty fence
  • Already-been-chewed bubble gum
Have lots of fun with smells and similes!